Chapters 5, 6, and 7 from the rough draft were cannibalized to make the current draft of Chapter 5. That's right; I tore three rough chapters apart to create this one draft of this one chapter. The result is that the story is much tighter, but it took a lot of time to rework everything and make the necessary notes about rewrites for previous and succeeding chapters.
It's a lot of work but it's worth it. I now have a good setup for Phoenix's "Fuck Yeah" moment which likely occur in Chapter 9 or 10.
I'll post whatever I have on the 9th whether I'm happy with it not.
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