New Draft of Chapter 5

This is the roughest draft I've posted yet.  Still, it's fairly readable.  There are a few places where I had to skip ahead a bit, because of continuity issues that I haven't worked out yet.

But, that's enough of Chapter 5 for now.  It's time to start working on the next draft of Chapter 6.  This is when the story starts to get kind of weird...


This is a great video of some girl singing the Cake song featured in Chapter 5.  I wanna be her friend.